Deceptive, yet worth a rate...
Ok I really like pory2 - and what seems wrong here is that you are missing out on two things that make it great - firstly, no t-wave which really sells this guy. Secondly, it has a great special attack, and a thorough knowledge of elemental moves. I don't like curse here - hazers/psych uppers will 'own' you, neither am I a big fan of subbbing AND recover. Good attachment. I would rather see two of psychic/t-bolt/icebeam/t-wave over the first two, double edge has a great base damage of 180, and if you raise it too much with cursing, you will do too much damage to yourself, and continually need to recover.
No don't give it a hp, way too cheap, whirlwind is nice, and if you want t-wave here over t-bolt/drill peck you can do the good old whirlpara'ing.
This doesn't have mirror coat, and thus doesn't seem standard to me. As for eggy, well it will fear (rightly) a mirror coat, so I would change icebeam for return - helps if you get stuck in a 1 vs 1 battle against a miirorcoat-toting blastoise, and I have seen quite a few of these endings on the old gsbot! I think it has similar attk and sp attk, so you won't miss out on much with the loss of icebeam.
Sorry cursers don't work, and rest with no mint berry is suicidal. You curse, you take damage from grass/ice/water, you rest, you realize you will get smashed while you sleep, you switch to blissey to heal bell OOPS there goes all the curse boni. I would just tailor this a bit, give it roar over curse, always handy to have as many as poss, and attach a mint berry. You can blast away with quake and AP, and mintyrest gives it two lives, and more importantly, allows it to keep those lovely AP boni.
Hmm interesting, never seen this before! I would say go for reflect over light screen if its possible, as this will help magamr more - it has such a low def that countering is completely unfeasible, and this will get crushed by physical attacks if no reflect. Also, as maggy is fire, it takes most grief from rock/ground attacks, which reflect kinda counters.
Right this needs quick claw if you plan to survive without reflect - you take a quake, you counter and ohko hopefully (and counter is quite unknown on a magmar), and then you need the rest to go before the opponent gets an attack in, so make this more possible with the quick claw. Otherwise, I really like this set - creative, completely unstandard, and I can certainly see it doing good damage.
Overall rather a rollercoaster team. I liked the pory2 as a starter, blissey as a ****beller and that superb magmar, but the others were all very predictable and hugely common standards. If you could find uncommon replacements for suic, zappy and donpho, this would be excellent!!
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